A little story i thought of while listening to "bad end night". It's a little creepy but does not contain gore or anything like that. Enjoy ^^
a girl alone in the woods
an old mansion with tall windows
the big doors open with a squeak
a butler right behind it
"Welcome young lady, Are you lost?"
"Ahh... well..."
"Oh please step in."
a giant old hall
stairs leading to the upper floor
"Are you hungry I was just about to prepare dinner"
"Thank you,
But can't you just tell me how to get to the village"
lightning strikes and thunder rips through the air
she jumped at the sound
"I think it's for the better if you stay here for the night"
"Mmmhhhmmm"
she mumbled while nodding
she follows the man upstairs
they entered the door at the end of the hallway
"The guest room,
I'll get the maid to bring you some dry clothes"
the floor was covered with a dark red carpet
the golden lace made it look very expensive
a giant bed and a old wooden tablet
a glass door leading to the balcony
a wooden door
she opened it to face complete darkness
her hand was looking for a light switch
her eyes shut as the light in the bathroom turned on
after walking in,
she looked in the mirror
a cold feeling
her wet clothes weighting her down
the door creaked
she turned in an instant
a beautiful woman in the door
"I'm sorry,
Here are some spare clothes"
"Thank you"
"Please change and come downstairs when you're finished"
she nodded
the maid turned with a comforting smile
all alone again the girl did as she was told
at the end of the stairs a well dressed man was waiting
"Hello miss,
Pleas let me lead you to the dining hall"
"Of course"
he gently held her hand as he lead the way
she focused on her steps
not noticing how his smile turns into a grin
behind a heavy door a long table appears
"Please.
Take a seat"
the voice of the butler
form the other end of the room
so she walked to one of the free seats
next to a beautiful lady
"Hello darling I'm the mistress
What's your name?"
"Oh... I am...."
before she could finish the sentence a glass broke
the man had accidentally let go of it
the maid cleaned the floor
the butler served the food
everyone finished
The girl taped the shoulder of the mistress
"Yes"
she answered
"Uhm.. may I ask where the restroom is?"
"Oh of course
just out of the door
to the right
though the hallway
the last door.
You can't miss it"
"Thanks a lot"
she stood up
everyones' eyes fixed on her
"Please excuse me for a minute"
she turned and walked through the heavy door
the hallway was dark
not a sound could be heard
as she walked along the walls
the carped swallows every sound
the right room was easily found
but as she walked back
the thunder strikes again
the turned
and tripped over a fold of the carpet
immediately her hands reached out
but she wanted to pull them back
as they touched an other hand
she looked up
the butler coughed her
"Are you ok miss?"
"Oh yeah
Thank you"
she wondered if he had been there the whole time
"Please return to the dining room now!"
he sounded serious
she did as he told her
mister and mistress were drinking wine
"Please give our guest a glass too"
as expected the maid acted
and brought a clean glass
as everyone was sitting again
the mistress asked
"What did you do in the woods
It's dangerous in the night
Don't you know?"
"People have gone missing lately "
the mister added
"Well... my sister
she was one of those people
I'm looking for her"
the mistress gave her a merciful look
"When did she disappear?"
"A few days ago"
"So aren't you scared to go alone"
"Well ...."
the maid entered
"It's already late
You should rest now"
so the girl left the room
went upstairs to her room
and went to bed
at first she couldn't sleep
but the darkness
and the sound of the rain
made her tired
she fell asleep
the feeling of water on her face
and the cold wind
woke the women up
the window was still open
she closed it
it was still in the middle of the night
everyone else should be asleep now
she opened the door of her room
complete darkness
the only light source was the candle in her hand
she walked down the steers
in the hall was a old clock
it was ticking steadily but loud
she took a closer look
she noticed her reflection on the glass
she turned
steps
she heard steps
"but the carped...."
she usually one can not hear any steps
because of the carped
"It must have been the rain"
she continued to look around
as she entered the dining room
she thought she would see a shadow on by the window
but as she came closer
it disappeared
“It must have been a tree outside….”
again
the steps
she heard them again
they came from outside
she started to get scared
the heavy door opened
in the light of the candle
she recognized the butler
"There is someone outside"
"Pleas lady go back to bed"
"But the person...
If it was the killer from the woods"
another person entered
"Why are you both down here"
"The lady saw someone outside...
she must be very tired
It was probably just a tree"
"No it moved!"
the misters face turned serious
"No I think she is right
I heard something too"
"It's cold and stormy outside,
Who would be out at this time?"
"Maybe the murder from the forest!"
the voice of the maid made their heads turn
she was standing in the door with a oil lamp
"Maybe we should look for the person"
"They probably are in the old gardeners cabin"
"But were not using that anymore
No one entered it for a while now"
"Should we go outside and see"
"Yeah I think so
Maybe it isn't the murder
But someone in trouble"
"Ok let's get dressed and meet in the hall"
"Wait, should we wake the lady?"
"No let her sleep"
the butler was the first to step outside
he held a umbrella over her head
the group walked through the old garden
the wind was cold
their clothes got socked in water
in the old wooden cabin was light
as they got closer they noticed
a person inside
the maid was hiding behind the mister
the butler opened the door
but the wind immediately blew out the candle
the oil lamp was the only source of light now
a shadow on the wall
it moved closer to the door
but the door closed with a loud bang
the maid screamed
the old garden tools
left creepy shadows on the walls
the butler took the lamp
he turned on the candle
they all looked around
but the sound of a scream ripped through the air
it was the maid again
she was standing close to the window
with a person behind her
a shadowy figure
the mistress was the first to recognize her
"But you should be inside sleeping...
Were you the one outside the window"
"I guess you found me"
the voice of the girl
the sounded different than when she spoke earlier
she didn't stutter anymore
the maid was shaking
the cold steel of a blade at her neck
gave her goosebumps
they all had the same thought
tut the butler was the one to speak first
"You're the murderer"
it was silent
jet everyone understood it
"Yes I was hoping you would never find me here but now...."
a few days later a young girl was sitting alone in a café
with a newspaper
she read it while drinking tee
“Three people found dead in old mansion,
Police is investigating,
other corpses where found in an old cabin,
one investigator states that
probably the butler was the murder from the woods
and he was found by the rest of the family
and killed them because of it
police is still looking for the suspect”
a silent laugh
she smiled while leafing the café
knowing that they will never find out about what really happened
a girl alone in the woods
an old mansion with tall windows
the big doors open with a squeak
a butler right behind it
"Welcome young lady, Are you lost?"
"Ahh... well..."
"Oh please step in."
a giant old hall
stairs leading to the upper floor
"Are you hungry I was just about to prepare dinner"
"Thank you,
But can't you just tell me how to get to the village"
lightning strikes and thunder rips through the air
she jumped at the sound
"I think it's for the better if you stay here for the night"
"Mmmhhhmmm"
she mumbled while nodding
she follows the man upstairs
they entered the door at the end of the hallway
"The guest room,
I'll get the maid to bring you some dry clothes"
the floor was covered with a dark red carpet
the golden lace made it look very expensive
a giant bed and a old wooden tablet
a glass door leading to the balcony
a wooden door
she opened it to face complete darkness
her hand was looking for a light switch
her eyes shut as the light in the bathroom turned on
after walking in,
she looked in the mirror
a cold feeling
her wet clothes weighting her down
the door creaked
she turned in an instant
a beautiful woman in the door
"I'm sorry,
Here are some spare clothes"
"Thank you"
"Please change and come downstairs when you're finished"
she nodded
the maid turned with a comforting smile
all alone again the girl did as she was told
at the end of the stairs a well dressed man was waiting
"Hello miss,
Pleas let me lead you to the dining hall"
"Of course"
he gently held her hand as he lead the way
she focused on her steps
not noticing how his smile turns into a grin
behind a heavy door a long table appears
"Please.
Take a seat"
the voice of the butler
form the other end of the room
so she walked to one of the free seats
next to a beautiful lady
"Hello darling I'm the mistress
What's your name?"
"Oh... I am...."
before she could finish the sentence a glass broke
the man had accidentally let go of it
the maid cleaned the floor
the butler served the food
everyone finished
The girl taped the shoulder of the mistress
"Yes"
she answered
"Uhm.. may I ask where the restroom is?"
"Oh of course
just out of the door
to the right
though the hallway
the last door.
You can't miss it"
"Thanks a lot"
she stood up
everyones' eyes fixed on her
"Please excuse me for a minute"
she turned and walked through the heavy door
the hallway was dark
not a sound could be heard
as she walked along the walls
the carped swallows every sound
the right room was easily found
but as she walked back
the thunder strikes again
the turned
and tripped over a fold of the carpet
immediately her hands reached out
but she wanted to pull them back
as they touched an other hand
she looked up
the butler coughed her
"Are you ok miss?"
"Oh yeah
Thank you"
she wondered if he had been there the whole time
"Please return to the dining room now!"
he sounded serious
she did as he told her
mister and mistress were drinking wine
"Please give our guest a glass too"
as expected the maid acted
and brought a clean glass
as everyone was sitting again
the mistress asked
"What did you do in the woods
It's dangerous in the night
Don't you know?"
"People have gone missing lately "
the mister added
"Well... my sister
she was one of those people
I'm looking for her"
the mistress gave her a merciful look
"When did she disappear?"
"A few days ago"
"So aren't you scared to go alone"
"Well ...."
the maid entered
"It's already late
You should rest now"
so the girl left the room
went upstairs to her room
and went to bed
at first she couldn't sleep
but the darkness
and the sound of the rain
made her tired
she fell asleep
the feeling of water on her face
and the cold wind
woke the women up
the window was still open
she closed it
it was still in the middle of the night
everyone else should be asleep now
she opened the door of her room
complete darkness
the only light source was the candle in her hand
she walked down the steers
in the hall was a old clock
it was ticking steadily but loud
she took a closer look
she noticed her reflection on the glass
she turned
steps
she heard steps
"but the carped...."
she usually one can not hear any steps
because of the carped
"It must have been the rain"
she continued to look around
as she entered the dining room
she thought she would see a shadow on by the window
but as she came closer
it disappeared
“It must have been a tree outside….”
again
the steps
she heard them again
they came from outside
she started to get scared
the heavy door opened
in the light of the candle
she recognized the butler
"There is someone outside"
"Pleas lady go back to bed"
"But the person...
If it was the killer from the woods"
another person entered
"Why are you both down here"
"The lady saw someone outside...
she must be very tired
It was probably just a tree"
"No it moved!"
the misters face turned serious
"No I think she is right
I heard something too"
"It's cold and stormy outside,
Who would be out at this time?"
"Maybe the murder from the forest!"
the voice of the maid made their heads turn
she was standing in the door with a oil lamp
"Maybe we should look for the person"
"They probably are in the old gardeners cabin"
"But were not using that anymore
No one entered it for a while now"
"Should we go outside and see"
"Yeah I think so
Maybe it isn't the murder
But someone in trouble"
"Ok let's get dressed and meet in the hall"
"Wait, should we wake the lady?"
"No let her sleep"
the butler was the first to step outside
he held a umbrella over her head
the group walked through the old garden
the wind was cold
their clothes got socked in water
in the old wooden cabin was light
as they got closer they noticed
a person inside
the maid was hiding behind the mister
the butler opened the door
but the wind immediately blew out the candle
the oil lamp was the only source of light now
a shadow on the wall
it moved closer to the door
but the door closed with a loud bang
the maid screamed
the old garden tools
left creepy shadows on the walls
the butler took the lamp
he turned on the candle
they all looked around
but the sound of a scream ripped through the air
it was the maid again
she was standing close to the window
with a person behind her
a shadowy figure
the mistress was the first to recognize her
"But you should be inside sleeping...
Were you the one outside the window"
"I guess you found me"
the voice of the girl
the sounded different than when she spoke earlier
she didn't stutter anymore
the maid was shaking
the cold steel of a blade at her neck
gave her goosebumps
they all had the same thought
tut the butler was the one to speak first
"You're the murderer"
it was silent
jet everyone understood it
"Yes I was hoping you would never find me here but now...."
a few days later a young girl was sitting alone in a café
with a newspaper
she read it while drinking tee
“Three people found dead in old mansion,
Police is investigating,
other corpses where found in an old cabin,
one investigator states that
probably the butler was the murder from the woods
and he was found by the rest of the family
and killed them because of it
police is still looking for the suspect”
a silent laugh
she smiled while leafing the café
knowing that they will never find out about what really happened
a girl alone in the woods
an old mansion with tall windows
the big doors open with a squeak
a butler right behind it
"Welcome young lady, Are you lost?"
"Ahh... well..."
"Oh please step in."
a giant old hall
stairs leading to the upper floor
"Are you hungry I was just about to prepare dinner"
"Thank you,
But can't you just tell me how to get to the village"
lightning strikes and thunder rips through the air
she jumped at the sound
"I think it's for the better if you stay here for the night"
"Mmmhhhmmm"
she mumbled while nodding
she follows the man upstairs
they entered the door at the end of the hallway
"The guest room,
I'll get the maid to bring you some dry clothes"
the floor was covered with a dark red carpet
the golden lace made it look very expensive
a giant bed and a old wooden tablet
a glass door leading to the balcony
a wooden door
she opened it to face complete darkness
her hand was looking for a light switch
her eyes shut as the light in the bathroom turned on
after walking in,
she looked in the mirror
a cold feeling
her wet clothes weighting her down
the door creaked
she turned in an instant
a beautiful woman in the door
"I'm sorry,
Here are some spare clothes"
"Thank you"
"Please change and come downstairs when you're finished"
she nodded
the maid turned with a comforting smile
all alone again the girl did as she was told
at the end of the stairs a well dressed man was waiting
"Hello miss,
Pleas let me lead you to the dining hall"
"Of course"
he gently held her hand as he lead the way
she focused on her steps
not noticing how his smile turns into a grin
behind a heavy door a long table appears
"Please.
Take a seat"
the voice of the butler
form the other end of the room
so she walked to one of the free seats
next to a beautiful lady
"Hello darling I'm the mistress
What's your name?"
"Oh... I am...."
before she could finish the sentence a glass broke
the man had accidentally let go of it
the maid cleaned the floor
the butler served the food
everyone finished
The girl taped the shoulder of the mistress
"Yes"
she answered
"Uhm.. may I ask where the restroom is?"
"Oh of course
just out of the door
to the right
though the hallway
the last door.
You can't miss it"
"Thanks a lot"
she stood up
everyones' eyes fixed on her
"Please excuse me for a minute"
she turned and walked through the heavy door
the hallway was dark
not a sound could be heard
as she walked along the walls
the carped swallows every sound
the right room was easily found
but as she walked back
the thunder strikes again
the turned
and tripped over a fold of the carpet
immediately her hands reached out
but she wanted to pull them back
as they touched an other hand
she looked up
the butler coughed her
"Are you ok miss?"
"Oh yeah
Thank you"
she wondered if he had been there the whole time
"Please return to the dining room now!"
he sounded serious
she did as he told her
mister and mistress were drinking wine
"Please give our guest a glass too"
as expected the maid acted
and brought a clean glass
as everyone was sitting again
the mistress asked
"What did you do in the woods
It's dangerous in the night
Don't you know?"
"People have gone missing lately "
the mister added
"Well... my sister
she was one of those people
I'm looking for her"
the mistress gave her a merciful look
"When did she disappear?"
"A few days ago"
"So aren't you scared to go alone"
"Well ...."
the maid entered
"It's already late
You should rest now"
so the girl left the room
went upstairs to her room
and went to bed
at first she couldn't sleep
but the darkness
and the sound of the rain
made her tired
she fell asleep
the feeling of water on her face
and the cold wind
woke the women up
the window was still open
she closed it
it was still in the middle of the night
everyone else should be asleep now
she opened the door of her room
complete darkness
the only light source was the candle in her hand
she walked down the steers
in the hall was a old clock
it was ticking steadily but loud
she took a closer look
she noticed her reflection on the glass
she turned
steps
she heard steps
"but the carped...."
she usually one can not hear any steps
because of the carped
"It must have been the rain"
she continued to look around
as she entered the dining room
she thought she would see a shadow on by the window
but as she came closer
it disappeared
“It must have been a tree outside….”
again
the steps
she heard them again
they came from outside
she started to get scared
the heavy door opened
in the light of the candle
she recognized the butler
"There is someone outside"
"Pleas lady go back to bed"
"But the person...
If it was the killer from the woods"
another person entered
"Why are you both down here"
"The lady saw someone outside...
she must be very tired
It was probably just a tree"
"No it moved!"
the misters face turned serious
"No I think she is right
I heard something too"
"It's cold and stormy outside,
Who would be out at this time?"
"Maybe the murder from the forest!"
the voice of the maid made their heads turn
she was standing in the door with a oil lamp
"Maybe we should look for the person"
"They probably are in the old gardeners cabin"
"But were not using that anymore
No one entered it for a while now"
"Should we go outside and see"
"Yeah I think so
Maybe it isn't the murder
But someone in trouble"
"Ok let's get dressed and meet in the hall"
"Wait, should we wake the lady?"
"No let her sleep"
the butler was the first to step outside
he held a umbrella over her head
the group walked through the old garden
the wind was cold
their clothes got socked in water
in the old wooden cabin was light
as they got closer they noticed
a person inside
the maid was hiding behind the mister
the butler opened the door
but the wind immediately blew out the candle
the oil lamp was the only source of light now
a shadow on the wall
it moved closer to the door
but the door closed with a loud bang
the maid screamed
the old garden tools
left creepy shadows on the walls
the butler took the lamp
he turned on the candle
they all looked around
but the sound of a scream ripped through the air
it was the maid again
she was standing close to the window
with a person behind her
a shadowy figure
the mistress was the first to recognize her
"But you should be inside sleeping...
Were you the one outside the window"
"I guess you found me"
the voice of the girl
the sounded different than when she spoke earlier
she didn't stutter anymore
the maid was shaking
the cold steel of a blade at her neck
gave her goosebumps
they all had the same thought
tut the butler was the one to speak first
"You're the murderer"
it was silent
jet everyone understood it
"Yes I was hoping you would never find me here but now...."
a few days later a young girl was sitting alone in a café
with a newspaper
she read it while drinking tee
“Three people found dead in old mansion,
Police is investigating,
other corpses where found in an old cabin,
one investigator states that
probably the butler was the murder from the woods
and he was found by the rest of the family
and killed them because of it
police is still looking for the suspect”
a silent laugh
she smiled while leafing the café
knowing that they will never find out about what really happened
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3.14159265358979323 (Freitag, 12 Mai 2017 22:01)
I absolutely love that story!!!